Revise your writing
Write a paragraph about your internet useage. How much time do you and your friends spend online. Do you know anybody who you think should limit their time? Make sure you tell why or why not. Use specific examples.
Your response must have:
- an introductory sentence in which you restate the prompt and state 3 or more main ideas
- 3 or more middle sentences where you support your ideas with examples and reasons
- a concluding sentence where you restate your main idea and leave the reader with a thought
- spell check and correct any texting shortcuts or misspelled words.
Now is the time to check your ideas and organization. Add specific details to make your position stronger. Did you use adjectives? How about adding stronger verbs? Make sure to spell check and leave the reader with a thought in your conclusion.
